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This is an important issue that some people like to avoid, so I'm glad you brought it up and analyzed it like you did. Your video was also entertaining, an aspect that held my attention throughout it.
ReplyDeleteI agree that some comedic moments helped lock in an interest from the audience, and you also cited a good amount of credible sources while you were speaking.
ReplyDeleteI really like the topic you picked. "Fat camps" are something that people generally avoid talking about, and I like that you chose to address it. I like that you are looking to change the stigma surrounding them, and you are presenting them in a positive way. I really liked how you did the video diary instead of a traditional video. It was personal, and I really liked that.
ReplyDeleteWith obesity on the rise your video is a refresher and a reminder. Obesity is an issue that can be stopped and fat camps are an amazing way to do for youth and adolescents. There is so much negativity thrown at fat camps but I support them. Great work on being informative and entertaining.
ReplyDeleteI think that your topic is interesting. A health camp for kids in your area would definitely be beneficial. Your video, though the content was predominantly you talking to the camera, kept me engaged with your inflections and opinions within your argument.
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