I would now define rhetoric as the study of writing and
speaking persuasively, well informed and clearly structured in order to argue
successfully. Referencing the original website, I'm seeing that the
definition they give is "the study of effective speaking and writing. And
the art of persuasion. And many other things." While I agree with
the website, after a semester of learning about rhetoric, I think there is more
creativity involved that both my definition and the website's definition lead
on. To successfully rhetorically analyze something, you need to
creatively think of tactics that will persuade your audience and convince them
of what your argument. To this day, I agree with my old post in regards
to successfully creating an argument, I think it is important to think about
incorporating pathos and style, addressing your audience, and sensitivity to
kairos. However, after working with rhetorical analysis, I understand the
importance of ethos and logos, relating your argument to your
audience and delivery. I believe that these are the more important
aspects to incorporate as opposed to previous statements I made
last blog post.
I think it is critical to incorporate ethos and logos when
writing using rhetoric. Ethos gets your audience to listen to what you
are writing. If he or she feels attracted to what you are arguing because
of your background in education or your word choice on the subject, then your
audience is more likely to agree with what you are saying. While the
website states that rhetoric is often criticized for over using pathos, logos
and ethos, I think that logos can not be overused when defending your points.
Logos is very attached to successfully compelling your audience. If
you have educated yourself on the topic, or have proof of previous education
and you have facts, sources and statements to back you up, only one thing is
standing between you and your audience in successfully arguing your
point.
That one thing is explaining to your audience why it
matters. Considering your audience is an important part of rhetoric.
In order to know how to convince your audience, it is important to
understand whom you are speaking to. I believe every text or speech
should cater directly to his or her anticipated audience. It is crucial
because the audience has the potential to influence the way the author or
speaker chooses to deliver their argument. Knowing your audience is
arguably the most effective way to set your argument up for success. For
example, in my paper, it was super easy for me to explain to myself
why it mattered. I worked with refugee everyday. I saw the pain.
However, your everyday citizen of Glen Ellyn didn't know
refugees existed. I really struggled in finding a good way for me to
show the other people of Glen Ellyn WHY they should care. WHY
it will eventually effect them and WHY now is the time to make a change.
I still think this is an area I need to improve on in my writing.
I do still agree that there is something about a writing
style with an open mind that persuades the audience more so than a writing
style in a different, more one-sided manner. With the website defining
rhetoric as the study of "effective" speaking, the author must use
techniques, such as Graff's agree and disagree technique in They Say I
Say, while speaking to the audience to ensure the audience agrees with, or
at least clearly understands, his message. Lastly, delivery. Delivering
your message and not only saying what you need to say but also saying it in the
proper way altogether is one of the greatest challenges writers face.
Overall, learning about rhetoric these past few months has
made me a better writer. I do think that creativity plays into
effectively using logos and ethos, convincing your audience and delivery of the
argument as a whole.
In addition to the improved definition, I understand how
rhetoric remains important in relation to our class. We continually use
it in Fight Club to try and convince the other side of the argument why we are
right. It has become second nature to our class about what tactics to
use, but most of the time, we fall back onto logos.
Burton, Gideon O. "The Forest of Rhetoric."
Silva Rhetoricae. Brigham YoungUniversity, n.d. Web. 3 Sept. 2015.
<http://rhetoric.byu.edu/>.
I think you very accurately defined ethos, pathos, and logos. It's important to elaborate on these when speaking about rhetoric writing.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was interesting how your initial thoughts on the definition of rhetoric hasn't changed. Not that is a bad thing, but it seems like other people's opinions or definitions changed. A nice final post!
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