The authors believe that college
students are becoming over-sensitized to language. Microaggressions and trigger
warnings are two categories of language that some college campuses are working
to eliminate. I agree that it is
important to teach students how to think instead of what to think because my experience with this model
of education confirms it (Graff 62). Being
exposed to opposing viewpoints has provided me with an opportunity for growth
through questioning those beliefs. If college campuses censor expression too
much, then the perspectives that college students are exposed to would become
one-sided. In order for students to learn what they believe, they must
experience both sides of a topic. Regarding trigger warnings, books that
address difficult topics like sexual assault can teach readers valuable lessons
and provide new perspectives on the issue. Avoiding potential triggers supports
fearfulness and prevents growth.
Additionally, I agree that turning campuses in to "safe spaces" is dangerous, a point that needs emphasizing since so
many people still believe that banning language that could be potentially
offensive is simply “a resurgence of political correctness (Graff 64) (Lukianoff).” Being too
concerned with offending anyone and everyone greatly restricts our own
expression. At the same time that I
believe that freedom of speech is central to our society, I also believe that using truly
offensive language is wrong (Graff 25). Of course, racial slurs and sexist remarks
are not tolerable, but people sometimes overreact to certain expressions that
are not meant to offend.
Going further, the authors state that
universities “are teaching students that their emotions can be used as weapons
[…] [and] to nurture a kind of hypersensitivity that will lead them into
countless drawn-out conflicts in college and beyond (Lukianoff).” This practice is also
known as emotional reasoning which means that “negative emotions necessarily
reflect the way things really are (Lukianoff).” Their claim that emotional reasoning is common in college discussions rests upon the questionable assumption that
college students jump to conclusions (Graff 60). Just because a person states a
belief that another person disagrees with does not equate “a public charge that
the speaker has done something objectively wrong (Lukianoff).” Overall, college students must be aware of how
they interpret others and how they express themselves. Respecting others is
important; however, the freedoms of one group should not limit the freedoms of
another.
Lukianoff, Greg, and Jonathan Haidt. “The Coddling of the
American Mind.” TheAtlantic.com. The
Atlantic Monthly Group, Sept. 2015. Web. 10 Oct. 2015.
Atlantic Monthly Group, Sept. 2015. Web. 10 Oct. 2015.
Graff, Gerald, Cathy Birkenstein, and Russel Durst. They Say I Say. New York: W.W. Norton
&
Company, Inc., 2015. Print.
Company, Inc., 2015. Print.
You used the templates from Graff effectively and in a way that did not limit the construction or style of your essay. Your transitions also smoothly relate your paragraphs. I like your last paragraph's analysis as well; you brought up a part of the discussion often overlooked when readers jump to a polarized opinion of the article. You tie up the argument well and remind readers to analyze the entire situation rather than rely on a single viewpoint.
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