The sun swam into the city, coating every building with it’s
warmth, a golden glow to prove it. (1. Atmosphere) Like robots getting their battery packs for
a new day, (2. Simile) the daily
coffee worshippers (3. Oxymoron) filed lines outside of every Starbucks at
each corner.
I sighed. (4. Simple sentence) It’s one
of those days. one of those perfect,
goddamned days. (5. Irony)
Bang. (6. Onomatopoeia) I slammed my
fist into the table, blood’s rushing to my head. I pulled my long brown hair
out of my face and into a ponytail. I cupped my face, rubbing my eyes. I’ve got
to get rid of this feeling. Sitting up in bed, the pristine white sheets curled
around me, every bend and fold neatly pressed. I look over at my nightstand.
There’s a more than half empty bottle of wine next to the picture of my mom.
Hm, that’s unlike me. It’s 8:09 A.M.
(7. Setting) Shit, I’m going to be late again.
I swing my legs out of bed, feet hitting the floor,
(8. Parallelism) which apparently was a huge mistake. All the blood rushed to
my head.
“Fuck, I’ve gotta throw
up,” I thought to myself.
Pressing
my hand to my lips, I ran to the bathroom. The air felt electric the moment I awoke,
putting me in this state of turmoil. I still remember. Memories and thoughts
from last night were still vivid with color. What I’ve done, and what I’ve failed to do (9. Anaphora) were
colliding. Maybe I’m just overreacting.
I spat into the toilet
and got up to rinse my mouth out.
“Hot
damn, what a mess.” I laughed as I looked into the mirror, “I’m definitely
late.”
I started to get into
the shower, turning the water the right temperature when the phone started
ringing. My boss (10. Flat
character) is calling, but I decide to let it go to voicemail. I can’t deal
with that right now. Plus, whatever he wants to tell me would probably make me want
to throw up again, anyways. I put my phone on silent.
The cool drops of water create currents (11. Alliteration) down
my hair and across my skin. I could stand in here forever. I’m not trying to
wash my problems down the drain, though, I’d love to do so if that were an
option. Last night great; I haven’t been by myself in so long. I’ve craved this
independence. When the water gets a bit too cold, I hop out of the shower. My
phone has 17 missed calls from my boss. If
I turn off my cell phone, then maybe I could pretend that I don’t have to go to
high school again. (12. Antecedent-consequence relationship)
My eyes lock at what’s
ahead of me hung on the bath towel rack. Jeans and a hoodie are hung, waiting
for me to put it on. Pull yourself together, Kim (13. Protagonist).
“Okay, just remember that this is just another mission. You
just have to find the one terrorist in a high school 4,000 people. Plus, all
teenagers are stupid. I’ll solve this case quick.” (14.
Narration) (15. Antagonist) (16. Generalization) I think to myself. I just don’t (17. Contraction) want to go
through high school again. I mean, I’m 26. I’ll stick out like a sore thumb. (18. Hyperbole)
It’s 8:37, and I’m beyond late to school. School will be a
breeze, (19. Anadiplosis) (20. Metaphor) I’ve already done it all. I’ve got
my badge, my gun, and my instructions with me. Walking towards the school, students are spotted across campus, babble
filling the air. (21. Loose (paratactic) sentence) One of these students is
a threat. All I have to do is find him.
I like the phrase, but how is (3) an oxymoron?
ReplyDeleteAmazing story, the only part I have objections to is why in the world is there a terrorist in this high school? Where is the school located? How will she go about finding the terrorist? What are the instructions? How does she dress? Is she to mingle withthe teens or be in solitude?
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