I looked at myself in the mirror that morning
and was not sure if I could pass for an eighteen-year-old high school senior
anymore. Then I realized I did not have
a choice. I found my tightest skinny
jeans, distressed white t-shirt and flannel and threw on my backpack. I had black makeup on my eyes and a light
color on my lips. I looked back in the
mirror; I hit the nail right on the head.
I was grunge, yet approachable. I sort of looked like Miley Cyrus before the
haircut and color (simile). I kept
telling myself to act natural (oxymoron).
Just interesting enough that the nerds will accept me, and artistic looking
enough for everyone else to befriend me. Gosh,
I was so excited to go back to high school (sarcasm).
My boss had sent me to be an undercover spy at
Old Grove High School to try and figure out a student who had been leaking
information on the ACT exams for each year since 2013 and sending them across
the country. The schools first known
record of a leak was two years ago. This
tells me the youngest the student could be in a sophomore. I don’t have to bother making friends with
freshman (which is a huge relief because
I am registered as a senior) (parenthesis).
I walked into my first class with sass (attitude). Calculus two.
I chose this math class because I figured the students sending out the
test did okay in school (understatement) and were nervous about
college acceptance. In this class most
people looked me at a little funny because I looked too rugged to be
smart. The girls glared at me through
their glasses. Every single person in
the class contributed to the conversation and tried to take charge during group
work. Finally I heard the *RING*, next class (Onomatopoeia).
I walked into my second class (syntax).
English 100. I felt like the
other possibility for the leak is students who are struggling and feel like
cheating is the only way they will get into college. In this class, the students were sluggish and
quiet…not participating. So I did the
same. Just to fit in (simple sentence). One of the kids even told the teacher to stop
talking because the audience was bored out of their minds (audience). The class was
so dry, all our teacher talked about was memory techniques such as mnemonic
devices (mnemonic devices), I don’t
blame the kid for complaining. The teacher decided to switch it up and
talk about the difference in static and dynamic characters (dynamic). That was
more interesting because we starting relating it to timely books and movies.
After a few discouraging weeks of no new information and
starting to actually feel like I was in high school (JOY) (sarcasm), I noticed something unusual. Kate, the tough girl in my Calculus class,
watched me like a hawk (periodic sentence). She followed my every
move. Finally, I approached her after
school one day I just wanted to get to know her better, see what was up. I made eye contact and started walking
towards her. I’m not joking when I say she started to run,
tripped and fell (parallelism). Laughter
broke out, filling the air with people giggling, making heads turn, bringing
people outside to see what was happening (loose
paratactic sentence). When I got
over to her I asked her why she was running away and she looked at me and said she
knew my secret and why I was a twenty-two-year old in high school. I asked her if she had anything to say and
she said let’s get it over with. Well,
that was a little too easy.
I went to the office with Kate and reviewed all the evidence (evidence). When she was
interrogated and told what her penalty, she decided to confess. However,
from any point of view, she could have been proven guilty (point
of view).
My boss looked at me, gave me a firm handshake
and a pat on the back. He looked me in the eyes and told me he was
proud in a stern tone and loud voice (tone
& voice). He continued by
saying that I will receive a promotion.
I guess high school was better the second time around.
Interesting story; I think that students releasing the answers to the ACT provides a unique plot. It was kind of funny that the girl confessed so quick, in my opinion.
ReplyDeleteI think you incorporated the vocabulary words smoothly and effectively as well. The ending seemed kind of abrupt, but overall it was fun to read. The exposition of the story is really interesting; you caught my attention early on.
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