Hypothetically, let us say that I will be speaking at the next memorial because I had a family member that died due to these terrorist attacks. My writing process begins with brainstorming. I am going to think of sweet, kind, and supporting words. I would never want to include any graphics details or depressing statistics because it will not appeal to the audience auditory senses. I would speak on the thriving moments of those that have passed, the legacy they left behind, and how they helped pave the future. However, you must indulge those that are still grieving and mention the huge impact it has left on society. Due to the terrorist attacks, many feared getting on planes or being in the same vicinity as someone from the Middle East, no matter what region they were from. Lastly we'll talk about how we have attempted to mend the immense hole in our hearts and one day we will see each other again. Due to the fact that not everyone is Christian, it is usually wise not to make God references, just broad ones that allude to there being an afterlife or a crawlspace between parallels of time.
In my eyes, this would be a way to effectively, yet sensitively, engage with an audience from New York & Iraq. There is more emphasis on the Americans, but that is because of the huge sense of remorse and disgust that I have for this incident. Many share my feelings, feel the complete opposite, or have different emotions all around. Though our feelings toward this date may differ, we all have the same questions. Why would someone do something like this? The question that will forever be asked an is still being asked about this and other tragic events is: How could something like this happen in our country?
I like your optimistic and sensitive tone toward the subject, especially in light of your theoretical audience. I think the style you discussed would be very effective to those hurt by the incident. It is clear that you are very thoughtful and are exactly what grieving people would need in this situation. Unfortunately, you are right in saying that there are so many unanswered questions about this event. We can only provide support and guidance for those harmed, just like you suggested.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the personal narrative, it adds something different to your paper, and establishes a lot of credibility in your writing about this topic. Your opinions and thoughts come off as truly sincere, and I think that is crucial while writing about such events.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy your process on how you would write your speech. I appreciate your idea weighing your audiences religion because if you comment wrongly, it could either make or break your tragedy when being told to an audience.
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