The movie trailer for Everest is intense, to say the least. The
rhetorical choices made were intended to maximize suspense in order to make
people want to see the movie. The filmmakers are aware that the
audience is people who are interested in seeing the movie and so they make
the movie look as appealing as possible. Everest is based on a true story about
"May of 1996, [where] eight people died after a strong blizzard stranded
groups of climbers at the top of Mount Everest just after they had reached the
summit, making the event, at the time, the largest
loss of life in a single day on Everest..." according to Bustle.
This story line serves as “the historical occasion that would give rise to the
composition of this text” (BYU).
The trailer opens with dramatic scenes of the snowfall
and the climbers nearing the top of Mount Everest. In the rhetorical
analysis section by Texas A&M it says, "In a pathetic appeal,
rhetoricians tap a reader’s sympathy and compassion, anger and disappointment,
desire for love, or sadness to convince the audience of their
argument." Everest’s trailer taps
into the audience’s emotions like good rhetoric should.
The trailer reaches the glorious point of the film
when he stands on top with both arms raised (1:27) and the lowest of lows with
the moment of truth while crossing a huge gap in mountain at 1:44. Therefore, everything in between these points
in the movie is what the viewers are left hanging to see. The intention of the movie is “to teach [and]
to delight” (BYU). The idea of educating
people on hiking and dangers of Mt. Everest is also incorporated in the
film. “ I think the trailer
for Everest makes a wise choice with the use of snapping in-between
clips of avalanche and scenes from back home describing "the
most dangerous place on earth" and how
"humans aren't built to function at the height of a 747" (:22). The choppiness of the film and the words
spoken reach for the audience’s emotions and draws them in.
Nearing the end of the trailer (2:38-2:50), there
are screams for help and flashes between snow storms, pale faces and black
screens. In this case, the trailer does
a bad job of “briefly
restating your main argument. It should then apply your argument on a higher
level” like UWC, suggests. A movie
should go back to the roots in the final seconds of the trailer to reestablish
and remind the viewer why this all started.
Coppola says, “…the essence of cinema is
editing. It’s the combination of what
can be extraordinary images, images of people during emotional moments, or just
images in a general sense, but put together in a kind of alchemy. A number of images put together a certain way
becomes something quite above and beyond what any of them are
individually”. Compose Design Advocate explains
that when all these clips are added together it creates a stronger argument
than if one long clip would have been shown alone. I think this tactic is crucial, especially
with film. The constant excitement keeps
your audience observant.
Burton, Gideon, Dr. "Basic Questions for Rhetorical
Analysis." Basic Questions for Rhetorical Analysis. Silva
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"Rhetorical Analysis." University Writing Center.
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Sia. Elastic Heart feat. Shia LaBeouf & Maddie
Ziegler (Official Video). YouTube. N.p., n.d. Web. 18 Sept. 2015.
<https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KWZGAExj-es>.
Wysocki, Anne Frances, and Dennis A. Lynch. Compose, Design,
Advocate: A Rhetoric for Integrating Written, Visual, and Oral Communication.
New York: Longman, 2007. Print.
Ms. Loftus, you set up the context well in the first paragraph and insightfully described how the trailer maximized suspense. Well done! Although, just for future reference, elaborate on what the " rhetorical choices" are (first paragraph first line) before the body paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you were able to pick out so many different rhetorical devices used in the trailer. That shows that you really know a lot about rhetoric, and the tools to use it.
ReplyDeleteI like your analysis a lot. Your application of rhetorical devices to the trailer shows your mastery of the material, and your thorough analysis of the different scenes in the trailer demonstrates your critical eye and ability to work with short works.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your rhetorical device analysis and how you related them clearly into writing, it was very well organized and i thoroughly enjoyed it.
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